Monday, January 26, 2009

Street Violence

(This story is fictional and for educational purposes only)

I was walking on a small road, when suddenly I heard someone screaming, I went to see what happened and then I saw a robber running towards me, I hit him in the face and he fainted. Then I took a purse from him and searched for the woman, who screamed. But suddenly I heard someone shout at me and then a lot of people came and started to hit me. After awhile I tried to explain to them what really happened, after that they just said sorry and left.

Samuel JS
Upper 3

1 comment:

Daniel Gurujawa said...

Good work! That's an interesting twist of events and, strangely enough, something which might happen in Indonesia. I'll give you more detailed comments in class. By the way, the answer to the riddle is...the guy had the hiccups.